Nikki St. Crowe

A. I wish there was less smut.

B. I wish it didn't end on another cliffhanger. This is the second time, Crowe!

Seriously, stop torturing your audience. The abuse of cliffhangers cannot save how bad these books are. It's exactly what readers don't want in books. A book should wrap up instead of reading like one book split into multiple parts. Anyone reading this, take my words to heart.

Everyone in this book series is young, dumb, and full of cum. Squicky. Thanks, I hate it. I don't like the use of "freshly eighteen" either but that's the book.

I'm not sure if my brain can stop thinking about how Peter dicks down each member in this family so he's had an indirect sexual situation where his dick has been in their mom's and grandmother's vaginas and that's just weird. Really fucking weird.

One of the Lost Boys mentions fish having anal fins and they all get excessively horny over it.

A fairy gets hurt and might die of blood loss and the only cure is believing in fairies... Winnie you're surrounded by babyfaced idiots.

"I could use that sweet wrapped around my meat." Charming. "Now I'm not so sure any wet cunt will do." Man oh man. I love all of these misogynistic boys. Truly they respect their women.

"She'll checkmate your ass before you even realize you're sitting on the board." She's a powerless woman, since when has Winnie had that power?

"The rage that burbles up my throat enveloped by rage short and sharp." That's not what burbles means. You mean bubbles or boils.

"My stomach is full of wings and my pussy is throbbing."

"Yes, Pan."
"Yes what?"
"Yes, King."
Then he spits on her.

"Peter Pan dripping down my thighs."

I'm aware this review is devolving into mostly quotes at times but I have to share some of this content with everyone. It's hard to believe it's real.

"I'm cold inside, I want to feel warm."

The Dark One's island is called... Darkland. Ugh. Exhaustingly clever. That lagoon with spirits in it is more interesting. Also the shadow is a rapist and that's foreshadowing for the shadow. Yes, I hated typing this.

"Wendy Darling never went home."
"Shut the fuck up." Vane snapped.
The most valid interaction so far.

Wendy instead went to Everland.

Vane when he's overwhelmed by his shadow has his hair turn white and his eye turn black. Which I don't like. This book is already so much edge and we're teetering over that edge.

"His phantom limb aches with the memory." Hook has BID now? Ghost limb issues? Since when? Please elaborate on since when. Smee is a girl named Samera. Uh. Hm. I don't know about that.

This book has only boners, no plots, no concept of plots. It blew it's load every other chapter and took away the safe word.

1 star. Vane is vain and Winnie is a dumbass called a whore who proves she's not a whore by having sex with all of the Lost Boys.… (lisätietoja)