Beautiful writing with the single most unsatisfactory ending I’ve read since [b:House|19747756|House|Frank E. Peretti|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1387734068l/19747756._SY75_.jpg|192659] by Ted Dekker and Frank Peretti. Genuinely gorgeous prose, if you enjoyed [b:The Haunting of Hill House|89717|The Haunting of Hill House|Shirley Jackson|https://i.gr-assets.com/images/S/compressed.photo.goodreads.com/books/1327871336l/89717._SY75_.jpg|3627] by Shirley Jackson, I’m sure you’ll enjoy this! Just don’t expect a solid ending. ( )

Boring beyond boring ( )

Khaw has an excellent and extensive vocabulary. Beautiful harrowing imagery. A haunted house story plagued by the strained and complex relationships of the characters within. ( )

A short read ghost thriller with a veneer of coaxing, flowing prose.

But the characters are ANNOYING. ( )

Not too long ago, Cat took a break from her university studies to take care of her mental health - it had gotten bad enough that she was feeling suicidal. Now she's on a trip with the people she's closest to: Phillip (a rich white guy Cat was once briefly in a relationship with), Faiz (another guy Cat was once in a relationship with, although they learned they made better friends than lovers), Talia (Faiz's fiancee), and Lin (possibly another guy Cat was once in a relationship with??).

Talia has always dreamed of getting married in a haunted house, and so Phillip has paid for them all to travel to Japan and spend some time in a old Heian mansion supposedly haunted by a bride whose groom died before they could be wed - the bride was buried alive in the house, to keep the house standing while she waited for her groom, and every year after her death they buried a new girl in the house, to keep the bride company. Cat is there because Phillip and Faiz were there for her when she needed them the most, but the tension is palpable - Tina only barely tolerates Cat for Faiz's sake.

As you'd probably guess, getting married in a house haunted by the ghost of a bride who never got to marry her groom isn't a good idea, and things rapidly go south.

Khaw attempted to come up with a believable reason why these five people would voluntarily spend time together in a haunted mansion, and it didn't really work. Cat was massively uncomfortable from the start and didn't seem to like any of her supposed "friends." Faiz was a wet tissue of a guy who, from what I could tell, only agreed to get married in a haunted house because his fiancee wanted to. Why Talia would want such a thing was never really explained, but I was willing to roll with that, sort of, because sometimes people want stupid things. You would think she'd have wanted at least one of her other guests to be someone she genuinely cared about, though, and it seemed like the only person she maybe vaguely liked in this group was Phillip.

Basically, the group dynamics was incredibly weird. It was all so unpleasant that I was convinced Khaw was setting the entire cast up to die.

The group continued to be awful right up to the end, and their awfulness overshadowed any of the potential spookiness of the ghost bride. I wanted to like this - look at that cover art! - but unfortunately it didn't work for me. Its primary saving grace was that it was short.

(Original review posted on A Library Girl's Familiar Diversions.) ( )