Um. Not _bad_, but not particularly good. A lot of assumptions on both parts. Oh yes, and the standard 'great sex = true love' trope, pushed a little strongly (I'm a good girl! I don't do things like that - oooh, yummy). And just why is she keeping it secret from her boss and co-workers? The reactions to her sudden marriage are amusing, though. There's an awful lot of blurting out embarrassing truths, and very little - y'know, talking. Or thinking. And his idea of the proper way to woo a wife is...really really bad. Sex all night and kindness (but no touching) during the day? Come _on_, man! There are also several points where one of them forms an opinion (she thinks she's higher-class than me, he's much too handsome and famous to care about plain-Jane me), which are never dealt with, or even mentioned, again - not dismissed, not thought better of, just - not mentioned. It could have used some more editing, I think. ( )